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Date: 2011-10-21 05:52 am (UTC)

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Lovely work, my dear. I imagine it has elements of your grandmother's passing besides the paintings...makes it all the more poignant.

I am curious about Ed's participation in the funeral. Is there more about him in the sequel? If not, I think it's a good idea for a "missing scene."

*claps* Brava.

Date: 2011-10-21 06:01 am (UTC)

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fearciuil

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Thanks!

There a bit about Ed in the sequel; there's more in the one I'm writing now, though the meat of his stuff will probably be another story or two down the road. (I might have to re-edit "Delivered" as a result.) Anything in particular you're curious about? I didn't write the funeral itself because the only funeral I've attended that I clearly remember was in Spanish, so I'm not entirely certain how they go....

Date: 2011-10-21 06:20 am (UTC)

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First, forgive me if I miss any comments. The Comcast email server that is supposed to be serving me is down. :P So, I haven't gotten an email since noon. I double-checked here knowing you were replying to me earlier.

So, I'm curious if Ed actually did the eulogy since he made a stink about it.

My first funeral? My mother's. I was 19 and it was horrible. But honestly, it gave me one of my best descriptive lines in my fiction writing course in college. Obviously I was using writing to work through my mom's death. I'm actually still writing about it. I'm not sure if it's helping or hindering at this point.

Date: 2011-10-21 06:29 am (UTC)

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Ah. Yes. Comcast. My cable is through Comcast.

Yes, Ed did the eulogy, partly in a spirit of show-up-big-brother. (Big brother didn't particularly care, so long as he followed through.)

I can't imagine losing my mother at 19, and I'm sorry you did. *hug*

It's half midnight here, so I'm off to bed ... good night. I should have gone to bed two hours ago, since I'm still in the process of shaking this bug. :/

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